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When I was a baby,
I cried,
Whenever someone else
Tried to pick me up
However much
They tried.

They say I've got better
Since then,
But no-one knows
I might still
Be crying
Inside.
This is about my life. When I was a baby, I wouldn't let anyone else come near me, apart from my parents. I'm a lot older now, but I still don't like people who I don't know talking to me. I'm just shy, I guess. But everyone thinks I'm a lot better than when I was a baby. This is true, but I still don't like it sometimes. I haven't changed completely.

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DerelictVampire's avatar
Very nice!
Well-written, impactful, touching... By the way: you don't need to over-explain in your descriptions--let the work speak for itself.
Good job!